Saturday, September 1, 2012

List Poem



21/05/12

By Stefan

Books - Jealous of the fancy Netbooks!

Computers - Being used simultaneously

Heat pump - Heating the room as it's purpose

            The students - Under a tonne of concentration

Cords - Those snakes are everywhere!   

Poems - Scattered all over the wall

Art boxes - Dangling from a string

Chairs - Thinking “Get some exercise!”

Staples - Lying stealthly all over the ground





7 comments:

  1. Awesome Stefan.
    This is so cool.
    I like the one about the books being jealous of the fancy net books!
    Great work Stefan.
    What is favorite line of your poem?
    WELL DONE:)

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    1. like I said
      Computers-being used simultaneously
      since of the the descriptive word!

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  2. Awesome Stefan!
    I like the netbooks and stables, great words:)
    Well done!

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  3. Awesome Stefan.
    I love your list poem. It is great I especially the awesome words like simultaneously.
    What is your favourite sentence?

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    1. Computers-being used simultaneously
      Because of that very long word.
      Simultaneously:
      At the same time.

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  4. Spectacular Stefan!
    I like how you used the word simultaneously.
    My favourite part was the chair part.
    What was yours?

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    1. Like I said
      Computers-being used simultaneously
      Because of the descriptive and long word.

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