Tuesday, June 5, 2012

My ending for licked

I pick up my secret weapon. The pickle gun. I aim the gun at mum ‘pow’ she takes a mouthful of pickle, ‘boom’ Mr Spinks suit is now all soggy and covered in pickle. ‘crack’ I shoot a pickle at dad. ‘snap’ he chops it in half. ‘pang’ another shot, dad blocks it. “This will become a pickle war!” he says. He draws out his own pickle gun ‘pang pop boom’ It is now a pickle war. I jump behind the couch ‘BOOM!’ a enormous onion lands in front of dad. I see that Mr spinks has joined in the war. Dad is weeping like heck. I stand up from behind the couch and shoot frantically at Mr spinks. Mum is still sitting at the dining room table then... ‘Pow!’ a shot from mr Spinks red onion gun hits her in the head she falls back in her chair. I shoot a pickle at mr spinks he faints! Dad is nowhere to be seen then ‘smack’ I feel a searing pain at the back at my head then thats when I went out. Unconscious.

3 comments:

  1. Amazing Stefan! I like how Mr Spinks has a onion gun! What was your favourite part?

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    1. When he pulls out his pickle gun!

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  2. Amazing Stefan! I like how Mr Spinks has a onion gun! What was your favourite part?

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