Tuesday, May 29, 2012

"Just one more minute!"

Today we had algebra and I hate algebra I mean I HATE! algebra. I would have probably eaten my shoe to not go to algebra class. But algebra has to be algebra, do you think I’m saying algebra to much? good. Even saying it gives me the creeps. After recess I would have to go to algebra class.

After playing cricket with some friends at recess I had the long hard think of another excuse for not doing my homework. After about ten minutes of thinking I came up with my excuse, a classic. When I arrive at class there is no one here. So I quickly go over to the back desk at the back of the room (obviously). I had no friends in my algebra class which made it much worse. My class finally come in, what took them so long? Who cares, they are always too confident about algebra. They seemed very chatty, very chatty. I heard Charlie say “He is cool!” and Forest say “He like is the awesome master!”

That’s when I saw him, the coolest guy ever... my cousin ‘Jackson’. The best cousin ever! “Today I’ll be teaching you algebra today,” since then I loved algebra! I understood everything about algebra. I looove algebra, my favourite subject, now better than recess! If I had one wish it would definitely would have been... just one more minute!

13 comments:

  1. I like the first person narrative you have written this short story in, Stefan. You have used it to develop a character with personality. The way he shares his feelings reminds me of Buddy.

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  2. Awesome Stefan!
    It's so funny,I like the start were you say you really hate algebra.
    Where did you get the idea from?

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    1. from a movie I saw. I think it was called school rock!

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  3. Great Stefan
    I like that you did the writing choice!
    and do you like Algebra? What is Algebra? Is it a sort of maths or something?

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    1. I do like it and it's maths and it's hard

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  4. Awesome job stefan!
    I like how you write this story
    I like how you hated algebra and now you love it
    As Mr m said it remind me of buddy

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  5. Wow Stefan.
    Your writing is great, there is some very good verbs.
    What is your favourite part of the story?

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    1. when he loves algebra

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  6. Cool story Stefan
    he really hated algebra but when his cousin took algebra he loved because Jackson was cool.
    From Brody

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  7. Awesome story Stefan my favorite part was when you said I would have probably eaten my shoe to not go to algebra class.

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  8. Cool Stefan
    I love your story and it has a lot of voice and adjectives. Do you actually hate algebra?

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  9. Wow Stefan!
    I love how in the end you make him actually love algebra!

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