The beige leaves swirl and dance as
they fall to the ground.
The balanced temperature is warm and
with one flick he changes your feelings.
The cool wind blows until he’s blue
he throws the dust and
The native birds fly south so they’re
ready for winter
they make formations on the way.
Autumn is tired she has had a long season
time to sleep Autumn is over.
WALT: observe and include specific details in our writing
Includes four nouns (from observation)
Made the nouns do something
Started each new description on a new line
Extended each line so it makes more sense
(may include a who, where, why, what, when).